AydarZaynutdinov commented on a change in pull request #16919:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/16919#discussion_r813926246



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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/en.yaml
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@@ -37,13 +37,13 @@
 - id: home-model-title1
   translation: "How Does it work?"
 - id: home-model-title2
-  translation: "Write it in your language of choice - run it anywhere"
+  translation: "You choose your Favorite Environment and Programming 
Language!t apach"

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
     translation: "You choose your Favorite Environment and Programming 
Language!"
   ```

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File path: website/www/site/data/en/quotes.yaml
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@@ -16,6 +16,6 @@
 - text: Developed at Spotify and built on top of Apache Beam, Klio is an open 
source framework for data processing pipelines for audio and other media files.
   icon: icons/quote-icon.svg
   logoUrl: images/logos/powered-by/klio.png
-- text: Oriel Research Therapeutics (ORT) is a startup company that utilizes 
Apache Beam to process over 1 million samples of genomic data to detect 
Leukemia, Sepsis and other medical conditions.
+- text: ”Oriel Research Therapeutics (ORT) is a startup company that utilizes 
Apache Beam to process over 1 million samples of genomic data to detect 
Leukemia, Sepsis and other medical conditions.

Review comment:
       ```suggestion
   - text: Oriel Research Therapeutics (ORT) is a startup company that utilizes 
Apache Beam to process over 1 million samples of genomic data to detect 
Leukemia, Sepsis and other medical conditions.
   ```

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/hero/en.yaml
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@@ -13,8 +13,8 @@
 - id: home-hero-title
   translation: Introducing Apache Beam
 - id: home-hero-heading
-  translation: An advanced unified programming model
+  translation: The Unified Apache Beam Model
 - id: home-hero-subheading
-  translation: Implement batch and streaming data processing jobs that run on 
any execution engine.
+  translation: The easiest way to do batch and streaming data processing. 
Write once, run anywhere data processing for mission-critical production 
workloads. 
 - id: home-hero-button
-  translation: Install Beam
+  translation: Link to GitHub Repo

Review comment:
       Also, this button should redirect to the GitHub page 
(https://github.com/apache/beam).

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/pillars/en.yaml
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@@ -11,6 +11,6 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-pillars-title
-  translation: "All about Apache Beam"
+  translation: "Apache Beam Features"
 - id: home-pillars-social-text
   translation: "Check out our social media to learn more about the community!"

Review comment:
       ditto.

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/logos/en.yaml
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@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-logos-title
-  translation: "Supported runners"
\ No newline at end of file
+  translation: "Apache Beam Runs in These Environments"

Review comment:
       Add please an empty line.

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File path: website/www/site/i18n/home/quotes/en.yaml
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@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@
 # limitations under the License.
 
 - id: home-quotes-title
-  translation: "They tried it out"
\ No newline at end of file
+  translation: "Case Studies Powered by Apache Beam"

Review comment:
       ditto.




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