macksclark commented on code in PR #17741:
URL: https://github.com/apache/beam/pull/17741#discussion_r880788382


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sdks/java/io/google-cloud-platform/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/sdk/io/gcp/healthcare/FhirIO.java:
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@@ -17,6 +17,8 @@
  */
 package org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare;
 
+import static 
org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare.FhirIO.ExecuteBundles.FAILED_BUNDLES;

Review Comment:
   This looks like we're importing from the current file which I feel like 
shouldn't be necessary. Can we define these in an outer class so we have 
broader access to them, or make them not private?



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sdks/java/io/google-cloud-platform/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/sdk/io/gcp/healthcare/FhirBundleWithMetadata.java:
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@@ -0,0 +1,67 @@
+/*
+ * Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+ * or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+ * distributed with this work for additional information
+ * regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+ * to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+ * "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+ * with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+ *
+ *     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+ *
+ * Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+ * distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+ * WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+ * See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+ * limitations under the License.
+ */
+package org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare;
+
+import com.google.auto.value.AutoValue;
+import java.util.Objects;
+import javax.annotation.Nullable;
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.coders.DefaultCoder;
+
+/**
+ * FhirBundleWithMetadata represents a FHIR bundle, with it's metadata (eg. 
Hl7 messageId) in JSON
+ * format to be executed on the intermediate FHIR store. *

Review Comment:
   can you scrub all instances of "intermediate/final fhir store" please and 
just generalize to any FHIR store



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sdks/java/io/google-cloud-platform/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/sdk/io/gcp/healthcare/FhirBundleWithMetadata.java:
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@@ -0,0 +1,67 @@
+/*
+ * Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+ * or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+ * distributed with this work for additional information
+ * regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+ * to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+ * "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+ * with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+ *
+ *     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+ *
+ * Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+ * distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+ * WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+ * See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+ * limitations under the License.
+ */
+package org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare;
+
+import com.google.auto.value.AutoValue;
+import java.util.Objects;
+import javax.annotation.Nullable;
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.coders.DefaultCoder;
+
+/**
+ * FhirBundleWithMetadata represents a FHIR bundle, with it's metadata (eg. 
Hl7 messageId) in JSON

Review Comment:
   can you change the example to: `eg. source ID like HL7 message path` 
   
   Also the "L" in HL7 is capital



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sdks/java/io/google-cloud-platform/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/sdk/io/gcp/healthcare/FhirIO.java:
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@@ -58,6 +60,7 @@
 import org.apache.beam.sdk.io.fs.ResolveOptions.StandardResolveOptions;
 import org.apache.beam.sdk.io.fs.ResourceId;
 import org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare.FhirIO.Import.ContentStructure;
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare.FhirIO.Write.AbstractResult;

Review Comment:
   same comment here this is a weird pattern



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sdks/java/io/google-cloud-platform/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/sdk/io/gcp/healthcare/GetStringHealthcareIOErrorFn.java:
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@@ -0,0 +1,40 @@
+/*
+ * Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+ * or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+ * distributed with this work for additional information
+ * regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+ * to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+ * "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+ * with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+ *
+ *     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+ *
+ * Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+ * distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+ * WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+ * See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+ * limitations under the License.
+ */
+package org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare;
+
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.transforms.DoFn;
+
+/**
+ * ParDo function that transforms a HealthcareIOError for a 
FhirExecuteBundleParameter to an error
+ * with the body (string) as the data resource, for backwards compatibility.
+ */
+public class GetStringHealthcareIOErrorFn

Review Comment:
   optional: should we just define this as a subclass within the FhirIO Result 
class? 



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sdks/java/io/google-cloud-platform/src/main/java/org/apache/beam/sdk/io/gcp/healthcare/GetStringHealthcareIOErrorFn.java:
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@@ -0,0 +1,40 @@
+/*
+ * Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one
+ * or more contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file
+ * distributed with this work for additional information
+ * regarding copyright ownership.  The ASF licenses this file
+ * to you under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the
+ * "License"); you may not use this file except in compliance
+ * with the License.  You may obtain a copy of the License at
+ *
+ *     http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+ *
+ * Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+ * distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+ * WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+ * See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+ * limitations under the License.
+ */
+package org.apache.beam.sdk.io.gcp.healthcare;
+
+import org.apache.beam.sdk.transforms.DoFn;
+
+/**
+ * ParDo function that transforms a HealthcareIOError for a 
FhirExecuteBundleParameter to an error

Review Comment:
   This should read FhirExecuteBundleWithMetadata right? 



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