Discard the last email, that wasn't supposed to be on the mailing list. On Sun, Apr 4, 2010 at 6:56 AM, Cato Auestad <[email protected]> wrote:
> > > On Sun, Apr 4, 2010 at 6:29 AM, Kim Hawtin <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Hi Cato, >> >> Cato Auestad wrote: >> >>> Awesome! >>> >> >> Yes its good to see documentation being written =) > > Thanks, it seems like a somewhat unwanted job. > >> >> >> Attached is the Texinfo source (gns.texi), the PDF output (gns.pdf) and a >>> compressed file containing HTML outputs from the texi file. >>> >> >> Nice work. >> >> >> Texinfo looked much harder than it really is at a first glimpse. >>> >>> Looking forward to your feedback! >>> >> >> My first question, and please do not be offended, is English your first >> language? >> > No offence taken! English is not my first language. My first language is > norwegian. > >> >> If not, thats ok, you've done a nice job, but if so, you have an unusual >> writing style ;) Not that I am a literary genius by any measure. Im just >> happy I can help. >> > > Yeah, I have no doubt about that. The fact that english is not my first > language problably affect my writing style. I also suffer from somewhat > insomnia so most of what has been written has been fueled by small amounts > of energy, which again problably have some kind of effect on the text as > well. > > >> I have started reading through, it looks good so far. >> I have a few suggestions on small wording changes and re-ordering of >> sentences. >> >> How would you like me to send suggested changes? >> > If there is any spesific part you want to comment, then write it in a mail > so we can discuss it. > > >> I can edit the document and send you the diff out put, but I think we >> should discuss some of the changes rather than just applying them. >> > Yes, I would appreciate it if you sent both the diff output and your > modified version. > >> >> regards, >> >> Kim >> > Cato. >
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