On Thu, 2010-04-29 at 22:36 +0100, Phil Bull wrote: > Hi Mewshi, > > Thanks for submitting this! I've reviewed it and have a few comments: > > * The topic is well written. I particularly like the flow of the > text (except for the use of the word "facilitating" ;) > * The technical level of the article is too advanced; it should > target non-technical users and so no understanding of networking > concepts should be assumed. In fact, the whole article is to do > with a networking concept, so it might be worth building up the > reader's background understanding a little so that the > explanation of DHCP itself is easier to grasp. This might > include discussion of what an IP address is. > * There are a few jargon words in there (protocol, assignment, IP > addresses, server, router), each of which would need a > reader-friendly explanation when used.
I'd suggested on IRC that, instead of a "What is DHCP?" topic, perhaps we should have a "Networking concepts and terms" that explains IP address and DHCP and whatever else. It's hard to talk about DHCP without saying "IP address". -- Shaun _______________________________________________ gnome-doc-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-doc-list
