Hi April, Returning with comments. These look great as usual; just a couple of simplifications that I think background-online would benefit from.
On Fri, 2010-08-13 at 16:28 +0800, April Gonzales wrote: [...] > Also, here are two more topics for review: > - (Get desktop background from the internet) > look-background-online.page > - (How can I change the resolution of fonts) > look-fonts-resolution.page > > About the second one though, it seems a bit redundant. Modifying font > reslutions was already addressed in another topic (see > look-fonts-toobig.page) True. What we could do is move the step-by-step instructions out of the previous topic (fonts-toobig) and just link to this one. It's important that they're linked, though. > Also, regarding the last three topics, I'm not really well versed in > font rendering, so I think I'll just leave those topics alone for > now :) > Let me know what you think. Thanks, Phil -- Phil Bull https://launchpad.net/~philbull Book - http://nostarch.com/ubuntu4.htm
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"; type="topic" id="look-fonts-resolution"> <info> <link type="guide" xref="look"/> <desc>How to change font resolution settings</desc> <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-07-26" status="stub"/> <credit type="author"> <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name> <email>[email protected]</email> </credit> <credit type="author"> <name>April Gonzales</name> <email>[email protected]</email> </credit> </info> <title>How can I change the resolution that fonts are displayed at?</title> <p>You can modify the font resolutions by following these steps:</p> <steps> <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Appearance</gui></guiseq>.</p></item> <item><p>Select the <gui>Fonts</gui> tab.</p></item> <item><p>Click on the <gui>Details</gui> button. This brings up the <gui>Font Rendering Details</gui> window.</p></item> <item><p>On the field next to the label <gui>Resolution</gui>, type in the font resolution you wish to use. Remember that using a lower number decreases the size of the font. </p></item> <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Appearance Preferences</gui> window.</p></item> <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item> </steps> <!-- Guidance on typical resolutions, and why you might want to change the resolution, might be useful here. --> <note> <p> All changes made are immediately reflected on your desktop. </p> </note> </page>
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"; type="topic" id="look-background-online"> <info> <link type="guide" xref="look"/> <link type="seealso" xref="look-background"/> <desc>How to get desktop backgrounds or wallpapers online</desc> <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-07-26" status="stub"/> <credit type="author"> <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name> <email>[email protected]</email> </credit> <credit type="author"> <name>April Gonzales</name> <email>[email protected]</email> </credit> </info> <title>Get a desktop background from the internet</title> <p>Your system comes with many available wallpapers or desktop backgrounds; however, you may also download more from many sources online. To do this:</p> <steps> <!-- This topic is only about desktop backgrounds, so any picture will do. Mentioning themes and icons may confuse the issue; these can be explained in a different topic. --> <item><p>Visit a website that lists downloadable desktop elements such as themes, wallpapers, and icons for your desktop. One excellent source is www.gnome-look.org. </p></item> <!-- Should add a link to gnome-look --> <item><p>Select from one of the many wallpapers available. </p></item> <item><p>Download the wallpaper you have selected and save it on your computer.</p></item> <!-- Mention that, to download the wallpaper, you need to right-click and select the Save option --> <item><p>To add the downloaded wallpaper to the available backgrounds in your system, select <guiseq><gui>System</gui><gui>Preferences</gui><gui>Appearance</gui></guiseq>.</p></item> <item><p>Select the <gui>Background</gui> tab.</p></item> <item><p>Click on the <gui>Add...</gui> button.</p></item> <item><p>On the <gui>Add Wallpaper</gui> window, navigate to the location of the downloaded wallpaper. </p></item> <item><p>Click on the wallpaper to select it.</p></item> <item><p>Click <gui>Open</gui>. This will automatically add the new wallpaper to your system's background selection. Your current desktop background will also be changed to the new image.</p></item> <!-- I think you can just drag an image into that window to add it, too --> <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item> </steps> <!-- Might be good to mention that any picture can be used as a background, but it will look silly if it's too small --> </page>
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