> And here is the mockup at it's current state: > http://ramnet.se/~nisse/diverse/temp/gnomeorgfront-prop3.png
I like the mockup. Here is a try at cleaning up the language: ========= Simple and Universal With a simple, straightforward interface that everyone can use, GNOME removes distractions and makes computing fun again. No need to worry about viruses, complexity, or incompatibilities- GNOME Just Works. Powerful and Flexible GNOME is not just for our millions of users- GNOME is also a powerful technology platform for developers to write advanced, sophisticated applications on. [maybe include a link here to a fancy page showing the 'greatest hits of GTK/GNOME', like gimp, inkscape, sabayon, evolution, gok, abiword/gnumeric, firefox/ooo, etc.?] Easy to get With support from Novell, Red Hat, Sun and many others, getting GNOME on your Linux or Solaris desktop has never been easier- just [link to ~davyd/footware/]click here[/] to find out how to become a GNOME user today. ========== How does that fit? Luis _______________________________________________ gnome-web-list mailing list [email protected] http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-web-list
