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- Jose Salvador Fernandes


Ti son'varachi tambddi tinsanz asli hacho mhaka ghott ugddas asa.Oi! Osle 
rongit sanjer mhaka Zeliacho fone ailo. Fonaveleanuch tinnem mhaka dusrea disa, 
mhonnlear Aitaradis Moddganv mellunk urjent 'appointment' ghetlo. 

Atam hem Zelia konn? 

Poili thaun satvi meren mhojea vangdda xikpi. Mhojem 'classmate.' Attvek thaun 
hanvem mhoji xalla bodol'li khori, punn chittintlean ami amcho xallentlo 
sombond chaluch dovorlo. Mhojem M A-chem xikop zata mhonnosor Zelia kazar 
zalem. Panch vorsamni teg bhurgeanchi avoy. Ani kazarak att vorsam bhortat 
mhonnosor, ticho poti malaria pidda zavn somplo. Tea vellar Zeliak apnnacher 
mollobuch konsllon poddlelea vori bhoglem vo bhoglolea porim tem vagunk laglem. 

Dusrea disa, tharailolea vellar, Moddganvchea tea hotelant amchi bhett zali. 
Zeliachea monacho doria boroch uchamboll zalolo asa hem tichem sodchea poros 
vegllem mukhamoll mhaka sangtalem. Te khatir hanvem tika mhonnlem - " Tum az 
sodanchem Zelia disona! 'Am I right'?" 

"You are right, but who'll tell me whether I'm wrong or...." tichim fuddlim 
utram ticheach talleant jirolim ani ti odikuch osovost zali. 

"Zelia, oxem kitem vegllem ghoddlam az?"Laginch ubo aslelea hotelantlea 
veittorak 'snacks' haddpachi order ditoch hanvem Zeliak proxn kelo. Oddchonnint 
poddloli ostori vo cheddum, tanche thaim don-tin pavtti vicharlea bogor apli 
oddchonn sanginant hachi mhaka khobor asli. Punn toxem porot-porot vicharun 
Zeliachea monacher tann haddun ticheach tonddantlean tichi gozal aikopachi 
mhaka umollxik nasli. Tinnem apnnem zavn mhka hanga apovn haddla, hanvem tika 
apovnk nam. Zalear, ti apli oddchonn sangina zalear, hanvem kiteak itlo 
voir-sokol zavcho? Tichea 'freedom'-ak man divn hanvem-i te babtint porot zap 
kaddunk nam. Title mhonnosor veittor 'snacks' dovrun koddsorlo. 

"Zelia, tonddant ghal nu?!" Oxem sangit hanvem ek 'snack' kaddun khavpak survat 
keli.

"Zanna tum?" Plettintlo ek 'snack' kaddit tinnem mhonnlem, "mhaka anik eka 
dadlea thaim mog zala. Ani atam mhonnosor amcho mog boroch fuddem pavla. Mhojea 
moga khatir tannem aple potinik divors dila ani aplea dog bhurgeancher sarkoch 
visor ghala. Dor disa, don'parchea vellar to mhaka bhettunk ghora yeta. Hem 
pollevn lok mhojeo gozali kortat. Ami anik thoddeach mhoineamni kazar zavpachim 
asat hachi lokak khobor na. Toxi hi khobor ami konnakuch sangunk-ui na. Mhaka 
tin bhurgim asat hachi taka addkholl na.Tankam aplea bapaiponnacho mog divnk 
tannem khuxi ugtailea!" Itlem sangun Zelia mhojea tonddaxim pollet ogich 
ravlem. Mhoje protikriechi opekxa (expecting my reaction) korit. Punn Zeliachea 
uchamboll doriant hanv mat xant aslom. 

Ami dogaim monim ravlelim pollevn veittor porot amchea mullant ailo ani hanvem 
don chav 'order' keleo.

"Itlench sangpa khatir tuvem mhaka apovn haddlolo?" Hanvem moneponn moddlem.

"O!" Addecho hanso khelloit Zelian zabab dilo.

"Punn hi gozal mhaka kiteak sangunk zai asli?"Mhaka-i tache fattlem karonn 
zannam zavnk zai aslem mhonnun hanvem toxem vicharlem. Veitor chav dovrun gelo.

"Hanvem sanglea te gozali vixim loka porim tuka kainch mhonnpak naka?" Zelian 
ub vetele chayek ghontt marit proxn kelo.

 "Nam. Toxem kelear loka ani mhoje modem kosli ontor urli? Dusrem, mhojem mon 
lokanchem nhoi ani lokanchem mon mhojem nhoi." Hanvem sottasott mhojem mon 
ulovn dakhoilem.

"Torui astana, hanv jem panvl marunk fuddem sorlam, te babtint tujem mhonn'nnem 
kitem?" Zelian porot mhoji opekxa zannun ghevpacher bott dovorlem.

"Hem polle, tuvem tujea jivitachi ji gozal sangli nhoi, ti kiteak sangli? Tujem 
kalliz-mon lhou korunk , vo tuje te gozalicher hanvem bhaxeo (comment) 
korinastana, ogich ravon aikun ghevchem mhonn sangli?" 

"Te vixim mhaka tujem mon zanna zavnk zai. Dekhunuch hanvem ti khobor tujea 
kanar ghalea." Zelia.

"Polle Zelia. Tuka apli potin korunk zai te khatir tannem aple sakramentache 
potinik divors dilo. Aplea dog khaxa bhurgeancher visor ghalun ani tankam 
bapaiponnachea mogak vollvollaun to tujea bhurgeank mog divnk raji zala. Hantum 
tuka tachem kitem-i vankddem dista?" Hanvem ticheach monant vicharancho fodoll 
nirmann korpacho proytn kelo. 

"Nam, kainch nam.!" Zelia atm-visvasan (confidently) uloilem.

"Toxem zalear, hi gozal mhojea kanar kiteak ghali tor tuvem? Khuim tori vochun 
kitem tori chukta hachi tuka zannvikay zalea mhunnonuch mu? Toxi tor nasli 
zalear, az tum mhaka itlem urjent hanga bhettum-ia oxem kiteak mhonntelem 
aslem?" 

"Mhonnche, tujea motan hanv jem pavl ubarunk sodtam tem chukichem asa oxem 
nhoi?" Zelian mhojem mot thiravpacho proytn kelo.


   
  "Tum korta tem chukichem oxem mhonnpak mhaka kosloch odhikar nam. Tuvem 
ubarlelea panvlanche vatter mhoje vichar addkhollinche fator koxe ube korunk-ui 
mhaka khuxi nam." Hanvem mhojem mon 'transparent' kelem. 

"Oxem kitem tujem?" Apnnem opekxa keleli zap apnnak mellchi na hea vicharan 
Zelia apleach bhitor ghuspolem.

"Zelia, jivitant ami kitem-i korunk mekllim asot, punn sogllench korunk mat 
amkam odhikar aschonam.Tujeo khobro kortelea tea loka ani mhojea poros-ui tum 
tujem jivit borem zanna. Tujea jivitant tuka kitem bhogta-dista hachi 
konnachea-i poros tukach chodd bori khobor asteli. Tujim chintnam tukach borim 
somzotat, mhaka nhoi!Tuje khonti-dukhacho thav kitlo khol asa to tuje tunch 
zanna, lok nhoi. Hanv-ui nhoi. 
  Tuvem ubarlelea protek orthachea pavlacher onorthachem xellem udok uddoitelim 
khub zannam asat. tankam tuje jinnechea sukha-dukhachi ani kholkayechi matui 
khobor aschina. Mhunnonuch, az ganvant-vaddear tim tujeo gozali kortat. Tujea 
mona pormannem tum tor sarki vatt cholta zalear, tanchea gozalimni tuvem 
tujeach paimak ghuspon kiteak poddchem? Lokachea ulovpant sot asa mhunn vo tuji 
poristhiti tankam somzona mhunn? Ani tuvem ubarlelea pavla vixim hanv mhojem 
mot dinam mhonn tuvem ranant sanddlolea vori kiteak vagchem? Mhojea eka motan 
tujea novea mogachea sonvsarant kosloch bodol zavchona. Ani tea bodolak zago-i 
aschona. Sarkem mu?" 

Zelia osovost zalem khorem, punn tachea mukhamollacher dittayechim kirnnam 
fankarot aslim. 


(c) Jose Salvador Fernandes
12/01/2008
  
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