Dear Mr Parvatkar, You haven't mentioned in your press release below when is the last date for receiving entries for the tournament; who the entries should be sent to; where the tournament will be held; the number of rounds; the prize fund or the entry fee.
Do please remember to put in these details when writing press releases as it might make it easier for among other people yourself - for you can now expect a flurry of phone calls to you to answer these questions. The rule of thumb when writing press releases is to ask the questions: what, when, where, why, how - if your note is able these questions then your note will be effective. This common sense advice applies to all writers of press notes/releases. Regards Augusto .............................................................................................................................. On: Date: Sat, 20 Jul 2013 16:20:35 +0530 Kreeda Prabodhini <[email protected]> wrote: Kreeda Prabodhini looks forward to have your kind presence and support in order to help us gain the media coverage for the Rapid Chess tournament organized by Kreeda Prabodhini under the auspices of Goa chess association and Bambolim chess academy. *The Program Schedule is as follows:* *27/7/2013* *2:30pm to 3pm?????.Inauguration function* *3pm to 6 pm???????1st three rounds* *28/7/2013* *9am to 6.30pm???????..4th to 9th rounds* *6:30pm to 7:30pm????Prize distribution , Felicitation of Players & Closing ceremony.* We at Kreeda Prabodhini request your presence on both the days of the tournament in order to make the event a grand success. *Ambey Parvatker* *Sports manager-KreedaPrabodhini.( > > 8975985681)* -- Augusto Pinto 40, Novo Portugal Moira, Bardez Goa, India E [email protected] P 0832-2470336 M 9881126350
