You don't need a Java audience here, you need an audience with people who speak English really well. There's some overlap between the two groups, obviously, but a thank-you letter is not a technical document so you don't really need technical people.
Anyway, to try to actually help you rather than just chasten, I think you should try re-wording "I was very inspired by the meeting we had between Kotesh, you, and myself yesterday." The first thing that jumps out at me is that you're using "myself" incorrectly. The second is that the structure is kind of awkward. How about "I was very inspired by the meeting you, Kotesh and I had yesterday." Ian On Sat, Jul 25, 2009 at 12:12 PM, Jonathan Kushner<[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Guys. Sorry to bring this into the thread, but I'm writing a thank you > letter to an interview I had and wanted to get some quick feedback from a > specifically tailored audience ( Java, of course :) ). I'm currently a > junior level java developer. > > Once again, I apologize for discussing a non-GWT topic in this group, > however I couldn't think of a better set of skilled java intellects to > glance over this letter than the ones I read within these threads. > > thanks! > > > ___, > > Thank you so much for taking the time to speak with me about the Junior Java > Developer position at ___. I was very inspired by the meeting we had between > Kotesh, you, and myself yesterday. Your technical expertise and ability to > provide a heuristic viewpoint to a problem are inspiring. > > I am positive I have what it takes to bring the expected level of > workmanship you are seeking for this position. As discussed, I have small > doses of experience in various software development activities, involving > design, coding, debugging, unit testing, and integration/deployment. I find > myself at a critical point in my career where my focus is moving towards the > overall software construction process, straying away from the technical > algorithms and tools involved, and spending more time in the overall > planning, relationships, and routines involved to design a quality solution. > I am certain that with your mentoring, I will grow immensely as both a > developer and as a working professional. > > I would like to take the next step in this process and discuss the position > further with you. Again, thank you for your time. > > Regards, > > Jonathan > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Google Web Toolkit" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [email protected] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/Google-Web-Toolkit?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
