Hello,

I was reading on your site that "gOS 3 Gadgets is the third, best
version of the Linux OS that debuted at Wal-Mart stores less than one
year ago." and I wanted to suggest to reformulate this sentence,
because it is a little ambiguous - if you read it fast (as most people
do when they are new on a web site and want to find out as quick as
possible what it is about), you understand that is is on the 3rd place
at the Wal-Mart stores, that there are 2 others better than gOS :P
I know the sentence is correct, but if you don't pay attention, this
is the impression you get. It's just my opinion and I wanted to share
it with you :)

Have a good day.
Andrei Soare
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