On 27 July 2017 at 18:47, Jeff McKenna <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi Luca, >
Hi Jeff > Some feedback from me: > > - remove "a" from the first sentence: GRASS GIS is free and open source > software for performing spatial analysis. > > - add an "s" to "consist" in the second sentence: It consists of more than > 450 modules > both done > - in the third sentence, the term "map web services" confuses me, did you > mean "web map services" instead?? > yes, solved > - in the next sentence, change "but still at the bleeding edge" to "but is > still at the bleeding edge" > done, maybe should be "but it is still at the bleeding edge" ? > - in the section "A long term endeavor": > > - change "wide contributors community. Both combine" to "wide > contributors community; both combine" > done > - in the section "Interfaces": > > - change "the simpler for new user" to "the simplest for the new user" > > - change "text based" to "text-based" > done Thanks a lot for the review > > -jeff > -- ciao Luca www.lucadelu.org _______________________________________________ grass-dev mailing list [email protected] https://lists.osgeo.org/mailman/listinfo/grass-dev
