Anthony,

        Very interesting reading and you documented well the variety of 
problems in using IP private space in the core.

        I have some comments:

1) In the note:

"Note:  The practice of ISPs using 'stolen' address space has many of
   the same issues (or effects) as that of using private IP address
   space within core networks … "

Perhaps it is a good idea to add that even though it is not discussed in the 
document this is a bad practice.

2) May be it is just me and writing style, but 11 sections are too many. To me 
it was difficult to separate in the document when you are referring to the use, 
the effects or the possible solutions on using private space. Instead of a flat 
document, I would suggest to add some main sections to group topics. For 
example:

Uses of Private Address space
        - Conservation of Address Space
        - Security Arguments for a Privately Addressed Core
        

Effects of using  Private Address space
        - Traceroute
        - Path MTU Discovery
        - Unexpected interactions with some NAT implementations
        - Interactions with edge anti-spoofing techniques
        - Peering using loopbacks
        - DNS Interaction
        - Operational and Troubleshooting issues

        Section 11 and 12 are probably good candidates to fill "Security 
Considerations".


Best regards,
.as

Arturo Servin

On 2 May 2011, at 20:16, Anthony Kirkham wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> As I mentioned in my last email I had been working on this for a while with 
> slow progress. People had indicated to me this draft was worthwhile. I'd 
> appreciate any feedback.
> 
> Filename:      draft-kirkham-private-ip-sp-cores
> Revision:      03
> Title:                 Issues with Private IP Addressing in the Internet
> Creation_date:         2011-04-15
> WG ID:                 Independent Submission
> Number_of_pages: 12
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