Hello Stephen, Thank you. Answers inline.
Camilo C. > On 19 Aug 2015, at 17:09, Stephen Farrell <[email protected]> wrote: > > Stephen Farrell has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-grow-filtering-threats-07: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-filtering-threats/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > - intro 1st sentence confuses me at least. The 2nd paragraph > does explain it nicely though when I get to page 3. Maybe try > re-word that opener? Or just delete para 1? <JCC> I see your point, however, I personally understand it, so I wouldn’t know how to rephrase it without probably making it less comprehensible to others. > > - Figure 4 is mentioned in 2.2.1, and includes AS65404, but > that ASN is not mentioned in the text in that section which is > confusing, or is there a typo? I also didn't quite follow the > description in 2.2.1 either which may be related or > independent;-) <JCC> Agree. We’ll reformat the figure and remove AS65404 from it. > > - I'm guessing, but didn't check in detail that -07 includes > changes from the secdir review [1] (which raised some nits). > If so, thanks! <JCC> Yes, we included them. > > [1] https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05853.html > > > _______________________________________________ > GROW mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow
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