* Stig Venaas <[email protected]> [170918 17:04 -0700]: > Nits: > Operator (with capital O) has a specific meaning here. Also operator > (with lower case o) is used. It seems to be consistently used as > meaning operator in general (including Operators and Caretakers). This > is fine, but maybe some readers might be confused by the two meanings. > Perhaps it is worth pointing this out in the document. > > Are you intentionally not using periods at the end of bullet points? > It is missing for all bullet points in 3.2.1 and 3.2.2 except in one > place. > > This URL in the appendix should perhaps start with "https://";. It > currently just says > "github.com/bgp/bgp-session-culling-config-examples".
Fixed, thanks for reviewing! _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/grow
