Hi Paolo,

I reviewed

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-lucente-grow-bmp-tlv-ebit-02

and have some minor nits and simplifications in wording to be considered.

Best wishes
Thomas


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   Vendors need the ability to define proprietary Information Elements,

   because, for example, they are delivering a pre-standard product.


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   Vendors need the ability to define proprietary Information Elements

   for various reasons such as delivering a pre-standard product.


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   This This would align with Also for code point assignment to be

   eligible, an IETF document needs to be adopted at a Working Group and

   in a stable condition.


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   This aligns also with code point assignments where a document

   needs to be at stable condition in IETF Working Group first.




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   shipped to network operators to be tested there as well.


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   shipped to network operators for testing.


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   This would align with This document re-defines the format of IANA-

   registered TLVs in a backward compatible manner with respect to

   previous documents and existing IANA allocations;


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   This document re-defines the format of IANA-

   registered TLVs in a backward compatible manner with respect to

   previous documents and existing IANA allocations;



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   The encoding specified in this document applies to all existing BMP

   Message Types and their namespaces defined in Future BMP Message

   Types MUST make use of the TLV encoding defined in this document.



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   The TLV encoding specified in this document applies to all existing

   and future BMP Message Types and their namespaces.

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