Hi Deb,
Thanks for your comments, we have addressed both in a further revision (-05) of the document which i will submit shortly.
Paolo On 29/9/24 20:34, Deb Cooley via Datatracker wrote:
Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up-04: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-grow-bmp-peer-up/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Title/Abstract/Introduction: Please expand BMP at least once near the beginning of the draft (RFC 7854 does that in the title). Section 5: While I like the 'rearrangement of the deck chairs' language, it might not be the best when writing for an international audience.
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