Hi Mahesh, Thank you for the review.
Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker <[email protected]> > Envoyé : mardi 6 mai 2025 23:16 > À : The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc : [email protected]; [email protected] > Objet : [GROW] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on charter-ietf- > grow-04-05: (with COMMENT) > > > Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for > charter-ietf-grow-04-05: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to > all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to > cut this introductory paragraph, however.) > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Paragraph 10 > > * Standardize YANG data models and automation building blocks > > related to the operations of global routing system. > > Wouldn't the WG where these routing protocols are being defined be > the right place to do this work, with GROW providing the input? > And, the YANG data models should already be defining the > operational aspect of the protocols. > [Med] The WG won't develop modules to manage generic BGP protocol machinery as this is the territory of IDR. However, the WG focuses (and will) more on aspects that are key for operations such as automating BGP interconnections or providing means for operators to publish their locally defined BGP communities. Of course, modules for protocols maintained by GROW (e.g., BMP) will be developed here. Since BKK, we have Jeff (chair of IDR) as a tech advisor of GROW. Appropriate coordination is in place. And so far, there is no overlapping on these matters. > ------------------------------------------------------------------- > NIT > ------------------------------------------------------------------- > > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you > may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. > Some were flagged by automated tools (via > https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fg > ithub.com%2Flarseggert%2Fietf- > reviewtool&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C22452625 > 84de4c07f3af08dd8ce33f68%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0 > %7C638821629834143136%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRyd > WUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3 > D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=sydSRxoeza5yOfmKqqJoKCey8jjqxWGZu%2FVOsaZdS > JQ%3D&reserved=0), so there will likely be some false positives. > There is no need to let me know what you did with these > suggestions. > > Paragraph 1 > > The working group will document the operational aspects of > > measurement, monitoring, policy, operational global routing > system > > security, or safe default behavior of global IP routing protocol > > implementations and deployments. The GROW working group will > also > > develop and increase awareness to mitigations to prevent > malpractice > > (e.g., route leaks) in the global routing system. > > Too many "operational" words in the first sentence?? > > [Med] That's on purpose because otherwise some of these items may fall under the scope of other WGs. Will keep the text as it is. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ GROW mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
