Hi Chris,

"Chris K. Jester-Young" <[email protected]> writes:
> Here's a simple implementation of SRFI 28, which I think would be useful
> to provide in-tree for portability. Feedback welcome. :-)

Sounds good, thanks!  See below for comments.

> From b13b3cc1e362775ee06c446460d0926a8d67b569 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Chris Jester-Young <[email protected]>
> Date: Sun, 30 Nov 2014 05:20:54 -0500
> Subject: [PATCH] Implement SRFI 28.

Please add "Basic Format Strings" to the summary line here.

> * module/srfi/srfi-28.scm: New module.
> * module/Makefile.am: Build the (srfi srfi-28) module.
> * doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi: Add documentation for (srfi srfi-28).

These last two lines should include the variable and node names,
respectively, like this:

* module/Makefile.am (SRFI_SOURCES): Add srfi/srfi-28.scm.
* doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi (SRFI-28): New node.

> ---
>  doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi | 37 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>  module/Makefile.am        |  1 +
>  module/srfi/srfi-28.scm   | 34 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>  3 files changed, 72 insertions(+)
>  create mode 100644 module/srfi/srfi-28.scm
>
> diff --git a/doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi b/doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi
> index 2cf9fd1..95a795d 100644
> --- a/doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi
> +++ b/doc/ref/srfi-modules.texi
> @@ -38,6 +38,7 @@ get the relevant SRFI documents from the SRFI home page
>  * SRFI-23::                     Error reporting
>  * SRFI-26::                     Specializing parameters
>  * SRFI-27::                     Sources of Random Bits
> +* SRFI-28::                     Basic format strings.
>  * SRFI-30::                     Nested multi-line block comments
>  * SRFI-31::                     A special form `rec' for recursive evaluation
>  * SRFI-34::                     Exception handling.
> @@ -3276,6 +3277,42 @@ reasonably small value (related to the width of the 
> mantissa of an
>  efficient number format).
>  @end defun
>  
> +@node SRFI-28
> +@subsection SRFI-28 - Basic Format Strings
> +@cindex SRFI-28
> +
> +SRFI-28 provides a basic @code{format} function that provides only the
> +@code{~a}, @code{~s}, @code{~%}, and @code{~~} format specifiers. You
> +can import this function by using:

The Scheme standards call them "procedures" not "functions", and it
would be good to follow this convention.  Also, please put two spaces
between sentences.

> +
> +@lisp
> +(use-modules (srfi srfi-28))
> +@end lisp
> +
> +@defun format message arg @dots{}

Please use "@deffn {Scheme Procedure}" instead of "@defun".  I can see
that @defun is used about 8% of the time, but it would be good not to
add more.

> +Returns a formatted message, using @var{message} as the format string,
> +which can contain the following format specifiers:
> +
> +@table @code
> +@item ~a
> +Insert the textual representation of the next @var{arg}, as if printed
> +by @code{display}.
> +
> +@item ~s
> +Insert the textual representation of the next @var{arg}, as if printed
> +by @code{write}.
> +
> +@item ~%
> +Insert a newline.
> +
> +@item ~~
> +Insert a tilde.
> +@end table
> +
> +This function is the same as calling @code{simple-format} (@pxref{Writing})
> +with @code{#f} as the destination.
> +@end defun

function --> procedure and defun --> deffn.

The rest looks good to me.  Can you post an updated patch?

     Thanks!
       Mark

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