> This LGTM except ... the first paragraphs (quoted below) are an
> advertisement. This is out of place in a tutorial. So, IMO, they should
> simply be removed.

It's a tutorial addressed to newcomers, so I believe it's important that we
mention (or remind?) what Guix can do, because this is precisely what we are
tackling in this tutorial.  I don't think it's a problem, actually I think it's
necessary as part of the introduction.

Opinions, anyone?

I'm not opposed to swapping both paragraphs however.

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Pierre Neidhardt
https://ambrevar.xyz/

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