Prasanna,

Here is my feedback on the user-visible text:

pnmd_network_solaris_ipmp.c
- In the SCMSGS explanation, change "auto-create" to "automatic 
creation". Also change "would have occured" to "occurred".
- In the SCMSGS user action, change "Look at the ifconfig man page on 
how..." to "See the ifconfig(1M) man page for instructions...".
- In the SCMSGS error message, change "Can not" to "Cannot".
- Later in the code, change "Can not place %s" to "Cannot place %s".

Otherwise it looks fine.

Lisa Shepherd                   
Sun Cluster Technical Publications
"We're the M in RTFM"



On 12/11/08 16:40, Prasanna Kunisetty wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Solaris has simplified the IPMP architecture with clearview project and 
> here are the changes needed for
> the integration of this feature into Colorado:
>
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~kunisett/colorado-clearview/
>
> Please review this and let me know your comments.
>
> Thanks,
> Prasanna
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