Hm, i think it is a very good start. More colorful I wouldn't suspect. But a Part "Why Habari maybe worth a try?" should be with it. It could be a personal statement or something else, aber there should be soma sort of conlosion on the end.
regards Florian Am 12.02.2009 um 16:25 schrieb Matthias Bauer: > > A first draft is available at http://drop.io/obffhfw > > I think it could be more concise and colorful, but I don't know how. > I'm > also close to falling asleep. > > Comments? > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ > To post to this group, send email to [email protected] > To unsubscribe from this group, send email to > [email protected] > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/habari-dev > -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~--- >
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