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Nigel Daley commented on HADOOP-1917:
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Comments (nits) on setup.xml

replace <strong> with <code> in a number of places (environment variables, 
commands, etc)

"Installing a hadoop cluster is just a simple step on ensuring that the 
software is distributed to all the machines in the cluster." -> "Installing a 
Hadoop cluster typically involves unpacking the software on all the machines in 
the cluster."

"found in" -> "found in the"

"the hadoop scripts provided, found in the" -> "the Hadoop scripts found in the"

"the hadoop-daemons" -> "the Hadoop daemons"

"Environment of Hadoop Daemons" -> "Setting the Hadoop Daemons Environment"

"necessary configuration parameters" -> "necessary <em>configuration 
parameters</em>"

"Other possible knobs to tweak are:" -> "Other useful configuration parameters 
to customize are:"

State whether or not HADOOP_LOG_DIR already has to exist or whether it will be 
created if it doesn't.

Do you need to define somewhere what "Hadoop daemons" are?

"machines act as both" -> "machines act as both a"

"i.e. the" -> "and are referred to as"

"Hadoop Daemons' logs" -> "Hadoop daemons logging configuration"

"Bootup Hadoop" -> "Startup Hadoop"

"is the small matter of" -> "involves"

> Need configuration guides for Hadoop
> ------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: HADOOP-1917
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HADOOP-1917
>             Project: Hadoop
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: conf
>    Affects Versions: 0.14.1
>            Reporter: Sameer Paranjpye
>            Assignee: Arun C Murthy
>            Priority: Critical
>             Fix For: 0.16.0
>
>         Attachments: HADOOP-1917_1_20071025.patch
>
>
> We've recently had a spate of questions on the users list regarding features 
> such as rack-awareness, the trash can etc. which are not clearly documented 
> from a user/admins perspective. There is some Javadoc present but most of the 
> "documentation" exists either in JIRA or in the default config files 
> themselves.
> We should generate top down configuration and use guides for map/reduce and 
> HDFS. These should probably be in forest and accessible from the project 
> website (Javadoc isn't always approachable to our non-programmer audience). 
> Committers should look for user documentation before accepting patches.

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