> Hi,
> The W2L site is up at it's standard address
> (http://www.haifux.org/newcomers/). The linuxday site is up at a temporary
> address (http://www.haifux.org/newcomers/linuxday/). Please send me all
> comments about the site.
A few typos in the linuxday site:
first paragraph, second word "hamasoret" switched resh and vav
second paragraph, forgotten space before parentheses "(for free)"
third paragraph, broken link "directions and map": "/map" should be
"/index.html#themap"
under "prepare your computer": forgotten spaces before parentheses
"(partitions)" and "(defragmentation)"
under "registration": broken link "registration form": "/register"
should be "/#register"
under "help us": broken link "promotional material"
Some additional comments:
Second paragraph under "installation" a bit technical, might scare
people off.
Third paragraph under "installation", second sentence: reference of
"in it" ("bo") unclear.
Under "hardware requirements", just to be pedantic: Linux is not
limited to Intel x86 processors. Since we won't install on others,
I don't think this is important.
But regarding the requirement of a Pentium processor: what about
Celeron and AMD processors? Do we exclude these?
Regarding Windows defragmentation instructions: do the dialog boxes
have Hebrew versions? If so, images of the Hebrew dialogs should be
added for the benefit of people whose system is configured to show
Hebrew dialogs.
The link to Egged: it only allows you to search *interurban* routes
(this is all that Egged provides).
> Especially, please comment on the new registration form for W2L:
> http://www.haifux.org/newcomers/#register
It's a good idea, and in the right place. One minor comment: on
the form, change 'imeyl' (in Hebrew) to 'doe"l' in order to be
consistent with the rest of the page.
> I need suggestions for the color scheme of the linuxday site.
> The options are:
> 1. Leave as-is (identical to the W2L site).
This is my preference.
But why does the Penguin have a black background?
-Ron.
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