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Stephen Barlow commented on HDFS-2733:
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• Consider simplifying the first sentence describing each of the 8
configuration parameters, and have it on a separate line from any additional
discussion to improve scanability. Short noun phrases are better than
imperatives for introducing parameters (e.g., for #3, "Similarly to rpc-address
above, set the addresses for both NameNodes' HTTP servers to listen on."
becomes "The addresses for both NameNodes' HTTP servers to listen on.") Also
regarding #3, 'exaple' -> 'example'
• Unless config parameters must be set in a particular order, consider
switching to an unordered list (even though I just referenced an item by number)
• Wherever 'once' means 'after', use 'after' (reduces ambiguity)
> Document HA configuration and CLI
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> Key: HDFS-2733
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HDFS-2733
> Project: Hadoop HDFS
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: documentation, ha
> Affects Versions: HA branch (HDFS-1623)
> Reporter: Eli Collins
> Assignee: Aaron T. Myers
> Attachments: HDFS-2733-HDFS-1623.patch, HDFS-2733-HDFS-1623.patch,
> HDFS-2733-HDFS-1623.patch, HDFSHighAvailability.html,
> HDFSHighAvailability.html, HDFSHighAvailability.html
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> We need to document the configuration changes in HDFS-2231 and the new CLI
> introduced by HADOOP-7774.
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