Hi Jeff,

thanks for quick feedback, fixed this in version 16.

On 02/01/2017 06:06 PM, Jeff Ahrenholz wrote:
Hi Miika,
It looks good to me. I agree on moving to last call, pending further comments.

Spotted one typo in the new text:
s/Eeach/each/ local address candidate MUST ...

-Jeff

On 2/1/17, 3:14 AM, "Hipsec on behalf of Miika Komu" <[email protected] on 
behalf of [email protected]> wrote:

    Hi,

    as you can see the diff link below, this version includes some minor
    editorial nits, but also some additional text in this section:

    4.2. Transport Address Candidate Gathering

    The priority and RTO calculation formulas from the ICE specification are
    repeated here.

    Unless there are further comments, I would suggest moving the draft to
    last call.

    On 02/01/2017 12:58 PM, [email protected] wrote:
    >
    > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
directories.
    > This draft is a work item of the Host Identity Protocol of the IETF.
    >
    >         Title           : Native NAT Traversal Mode for the Host Identity 
Protocol
    >         Authors         : Ari Keranen
    >                           Jan Melén
    >                           Miika Komu
    >        Filename        : draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15.txt
    >        Pages           : 52
    >        Date            : 2017-02-01
    >
    > Abstract:
    >    This document specifies a new Network Address Translator (NAT)
    >    traversal mode for the Host Identity Protocol (HIP).  The new mode is
    >    based on the Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) methodology
    >    and UDP encapsulation of data and signaling traffic.  The main
    >    difference from the previously specified modes is the use of HIP
    >    messages for all NAT traversal procedures.
    >
    >
    > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal/
    >
    > There's also a htmlized version available at:
    > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15
    >
    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15
    >
    >
    > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
submission
    > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
    >
    > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
    > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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