Alia Atlas has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-11: Yes
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-homenet-dncp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you very much for addressing my previous Discuss points and comments. I understand that version -11 will handle the most recent concerns, as shown in the github diff. I've also read this draft too many times at this point to be certain that I've picked up all the points of unclarity. I've requested another Routing Directorate review, from a new reviewer, so I may be modifying my ballot again before the telechat on Thursday. 6) Please define H(...) in terminology, since Sec 4 uses it before it is defined in Section 7. _______________________________________________ homenet mailing list homenet@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/homenet