Hi Al, Thanks for the review. We replaced the section by appendix. Actually we did not move the sections to the appendix and these have always been appendices - despite we called them sections. The reason to have them as appendices is that these are not describing the protocol. On the other hand, we have discussed having a separate companion document that contains the appendices. However, we are currently staying with the appendices at least for now.
The changes can be seen on the git repo: https://github.com/ietf-homenet-wg/front-end-naming-delegation-dhc-options/commit/1e7e2d50ec554d64ebf7bca8ea4b08b33e24cfe3 Yours, Daniel On Wed, Sep 28, 2022 at 4:36 PM Al Morton via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > Reviewer: Al Morton > Review result: Ready > > >From the draft: > This document defines DHCPv6 options so an Homenet Naming Authority (HNA) > can > automatically proceed to the appropriate configuration and outsource the > authoritative naming service for the home network. In most cases, the > outsourcing mechanism is transparent for the end user. The document > describes > how a network can provision the HNA with a specific DOI. This could be > particularly useful for a DOI partly managed by an ISP, or to make home > networks resilient to HNA replacement. The ISP delegates an IP prefix to > the > home network as well as the associated reverse zone. It appears that the > document accomplishes these goals (although I'm not an expert in homenet > topics). The Shepherd's form says that this and a companion draft are the > last > items to complete before closing homenet (interest is waning). The protocol > details seem to be well-considered. > > It appears that the Scenarios were moved to Appendices, rather than as > normative section and subsections: > > Appendix A. Scenarios and impact on the End User > > This *section* details various scenarios and discuss their impact on > the > end user. This section is not normative and limits the description of a > limited scope of scenarios that are assumed to be representative. Many > other scenarios may be derived from these. > > s/section/Appendix/g and other fixes. > > > _______________________________________________ > homenet mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/homenet > -- Daniel Migault Ericsson
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