Thanks for the review Murray, Please find find my comments inline as well as in the following link: https://github.com/ietf-homenet-wg/ietf-homenet-hna/commit/66a4d61ca0ca9e4c3ddfe69015b2a3fd88444da1
Yours, Daniel On Thu, Oct 20, 2022 at 3:44 AM Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-19: No Record > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > I have not completed my review. I expect to ballot to at least support > some or > all of the existing DISCUSS positions, and will have comments of my own. > The > DISCUSSes are broad enough that I'm going to stop my review for now. > > The one thing I noticed right away is that Section 2 defines "Reverse > Public > Authoritative Servers" and "Reverse Distribution Manager", but those terms > appear nowhere else in the document. > > > The first expansion was missing. OLD: In addition, the DM and RDM may be NEW: In addition, the DM and Reverse Distribution Manager (RDM) may be We also combined DOI and Reverse Public Authoritative Servers but clarified that. OLD: The main difference is that the ISP that provides the IP connectivity is likely also owning the corresponding reverse zone and act as a default DOI for it. NEW: The main difference is that ISP that provides the IP connectivity is likely also the owner of the corresponding reverse zone and administrating the Reverse Public Authoritative Servers ( or being the DOI) > _______________________________________________ > homenet mailing list > homenet@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/homenet > -- Daniel Migault Ericsson
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