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On 07/01/11 05:46, Jeff Squyres wrote:
> Please review:
> 
>     https://svn.open-mpi.org/trac/hwloc/changeset/3046
> 

Some possible tweaks:

# Some operating systems do not systematically provide separate
# functions for CPU and Memory binding.

Is "systematically" meant to be there ?  I'm not quite
sure what you mean by it in this context, sorry!

# Conversely, some operating systems support the notion of a
# "current" memory binding policy

Can I suggest adding "do" before "support", and..

#  and do not permit allocating data on a specific node

change that "and" to a "but".

# without changing the current policy and allocate the data.

Should that "allocate" be "allocating" ?

# Hwloc provides both functions that set the current memory
# binding policies (if supported), and functions that allocate
# memory bound to specific node set.

Can I suggest either dropping "both" or instead saying:

$ Hwloc provides functions that both set the current memory
$ binding policies (if supported) and that allocate memory
$ bound to specific node set.

Hope that's useful!

cheers,
Chris
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    Christopher Samuel - Senior Systems Administrator
 VLSCI - Victorian Life Sciences Computation Initiative
 Email: sam...@unimelb.edu.au Phone: +61 (0)3 903 55545
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