Linda
I looked at the draft and think that it needs some work before it is a
YANG module:-)
- NMDA conformance is not mentioned
- the reference to RFC2119 is out of date
- the format for tree diagrams is now specified in RFC8340
- YANG import statements lack 'reference' as in
import ietf-inet-types {
prefix "inet";
reference "RFC 6991 - Common YANG Data Types";
- YANG module has no copyright
- YANG module has (almost) no reference statements to tell the user
(like me) whereto go to understand it. look, for example, at
draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang
for a module that is well supplied with reference statements
- YANG module should reference the RFC from which it comes
- the one and only reference in the YANG module is
reference
"draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07";
but the I-D is
draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06
I do not understand
- where you reference an I-D, it needs a Note to the RFC Editor e.g.
reference "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07";
becomes
reference RFC YYYY "....."
-- Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to
"draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring"
- IANA Considerations must be present
- Security Considerations must include the YANG template
HTH:-)
I am not on the I2NSF list.
Tom Petch
----- Original Message -----
From: "Linda Dunbar" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Cc: <[email protected]>
Sent: Wednesday, December 05, 2018 5:27 PM
> OpsaWG:
>
> I2NSF WG has a draft on data models (and information model) of
monitoring network security functions:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0
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>
> It includes data models to retrieve System Alarms, System Events,
counters, NSF Events/logs, etc.
>
> Want to see if there are data models already specified by Ops Area for
monitoring network functions which might have some common attributes
that I2NSF can import.
>
> Thanks, Linda Dunbar
>
> From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2018 6:35 PM
> To: Linda Dunbar
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>; Yoav Nir
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
> Cc: [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>;
[email protected]<mailto:skku_secu-brain_all@googlegr
oups.com>; Sangwon Hyun <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>;
Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
> Subject: Request for WG Adoption Call on NSF Monitoring Draft
>
> Hi Linda and Yoav,
> As we discussed the last Bangkok meeting,
> I have merged the two drafts of Information Model and Data Model
> for NSF Monitoring into a new draft called
draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06:
>
> - Two Information and Data Model Drafts
> . draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07
> . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-05
>
> - A Merged Data Model Draft
> . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06
> .
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0
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>
> The NSF monitoring is very important to manage the I2NSF security
service system
> in a reliable and scalable fashion.
>
> Could you start a WG adoption call for this draft?
>
> Thanks.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
> --
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> Sungkyunkwan University
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