Hi Eric, Linda and Yoav,
I have reflected all the comments from Eric and submitted the revision -08
as follows:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-08
The changes are described in Appendix A of -08 document as follows:
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Appendix A. Changes from draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-07
The following changes have been made from
draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-07:
o This version has reflected all the comments from Eric Rescorla who
is a Security Area Director as follows.
o In Section 1, Network Security Function (NFV) is defined in the
viewpoint of the I2NSF framework.
o In Section 1, a user using the I2NSF User is clarified as a system
administrator in the I2NSF framework.
o In Section 1, as the applicability of the I2NSF framework, four
different scenarios are represented with a standard bulleted list.
o The standard document about ETSI-NFV is moved to Normative
References.
o In Section 2, key terms (e.g., Network Function, Network Security
Function, Network Functions Virtualization, and Servive Function
Chaining) are internally defined along with the reference to open
specifications.
o In Section 2, the definition of Firewall is corrected such that
some suspicious packets are inspected by the firewall rather than
every packet.
o In Section 3, for a Developer's Management System, the problem of
an inside attacker is addressed, and a possible solution for the
inside attacks is suggested through I2NSF NSF monitoring
functionality.
o In Section 4, an XML file for the RESTCONF/YANG for the time-
dependent web access control is pointed out with a reference to
the Consumer-Facing Interface's data model
[consumer-facing-inf-dm].
o In Section 6, the definitions of an SDN forwarding element and an
NSF are clarified such that an SDN forwarding element is a switch
running as either a hardware middle box or a software virtual
switch, and an NSF is a virtual network function for a security
service.
o In Section 6.3, a flow forwarding path management scheme in
[AVANT-GUARD] is described in a self-contained way as follows.
For DDoS-attack mitigation, the forwarding of traffic flows in
switches can be dynamically configured such that malicious traffic
flows are handled by the paths separated from normal traffic flows
in order to minimize the impact of those malicious traffic on the
the servers. This flow path separation can be done by a flow
forwarding path management scheme based on [AVANT-GUARD].
o Some typos are corrected such as "Interner -> Internet",
"Registation -> Registration", "The low-level security rules for
web filter checks -> The low-level security rules for web filter
check", "fltering -> filtering", "illegal packets -> malicious
packets", "manipulate rules -> configure rules", "managenent ->
management", and "DDoS-attack mitigation operations -> DDoS-attack
mitigation".
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Thanks and Merry Christmas!
Best Regards,
Paul
On Fri, Dec 21, 2018 at 11:33 PM Eric Rescorla <[email protected]> wrote:
> Rich version of this review at:
> https://mozphab-ietf.devsvcdev.mozaws.net/D3181
>
>
> I found a number of typographical and grammar errors. Please give this
> document a thorough read.
>
> IMPORTANT
> S 1.
> >
> > Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) defines a framework
> > and interfaces for interacting with Network Security Functions
> > (NSFs). The I2NSF framework allows heterogeneous NSFs developed by
> > different security solution vendors to be used in the Network
> > Functions Virtualization (NFV) environment [ETSI-NFV] by utilizing
>
> Much of this document cannot be understood without reading ETSI-NFV,
> so it has to be a normative reference. It also would be helpful to
> provide a link.
>
>
> S 2.
> > This document uses the terminology described in [RFC7149],
> > [ITU-T.Y.3300], [ONF-OpenFlow], [ONF-SDN-Architecture],
> > [ITU-T.X.1252], [ITU-T.X.800], [RFC8329], [i2nsf-terminology],
> > [consumer-facing-inf-im], [consumer-facing-inf-dm],
> > [i2nsf-nsf-cap-im], [nsf-facing-inf-dm], [registration-inf-dm], and
> > [nsf-triggered-steering]. In addition, the following terms are
>
> Every term in this document needs to be understandable without
> reference to closed specifications or internally defined. Please
> ensure that this is so,
>
>
> S 3.
> > used for the I2NSF NSF-Facing Interface.
> >
> > The Registration Interface between the Security Controller and the
> > Developer's Management System can be implemented by RESTCONF
> > [RFC8040]. The data model defined in [registration-inf-dm] can be
> > used for the I2NSF Registration Interface.
>
> What role does the Developer's Management System play in this? I think
> this refers to the text above starting with "The developers (or
> vendors)...". Is that correct?
>
> Assuming I am correct, this seems like a potentially serious security
> vulnerability in this design in that it potentially allows an inside
> attacker at the developer to seriously weaken a system's security.
> What protections exist to prevent this?
>
>
> S 4.
> > administrator wants to control the staff members' access to a
> > particular Interner service (e.g., Example.com) during business
> > hours. The following is an example high-level security policy rule
> > that the administrator requests: Block the staff members' access to
> > Example.com from 9 AM to 6 PM. The administrator sends this high-
> > level security policy to the Security Controller, then the Security
>
> The text above suggests that high-level policies are via
> RESTCONF/YANG, but this is clearly freeform text.
> COMMENTS
> S 1.
> >
> > 1. Introduction
> >
> > Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) defines a framework
> > and interfaces for interacting with Network Security Functions
> > (NSFs). The I2NSF framework allows heterogeneous NSFs developed by
>
> Please define "Network Security Functions" here.
>
>
>
>
> S 1.
> > functions in the NFV platform. In the I2NSF framework, each NSF
> > initially registers the profile of its own capabilities into the
> > system in order for themselves to be available in the system. In
> > addition, the Security Controller is validated by the I2NSF Client
> > (also called I2NSF User) that the user is employing, so that the
> user
> > can request security services through the Security Controller.
>
> In this case the user is the system administrator.
>
>
> S 1.
> > [RFC7149] to provide different security functionality such as
> > firewalls [opsawg-firewalls], Deep Packet Inspection (DPI), and
> > Distributed Denial of Service (DDoS) attack mitigation; (iv) the use
> > of NFV as supporting technology. The implementation of I2NSF in
> > these scenarios has allowed us to verify the applicability and
> > effectiveness of the I2NSF framework for a variety of use cases.
>
> This would be easier to read with a standard bulleted list.
>
>
> S 2.
> > network resources, which facilitates the design, delivery and
> > operation of network services in a dynamic and scalable manner
> > [ITU-T.Y.3300].
> >
> > o Firewall: A service function at the junction of two network
> > segments that inspects every packet that attempts to cross the
>
> Nit: It might not inspect *every* packet.
>
>
> S 4.
> >
> > 4. Time-dependent Web Access Control Service
> >
> > This service scenario assumes that an enterprise network
> > administrator wants to control the staff members' access to a
> > particular Interner service (e.g., Example.com) during business
>
> Nit: "Internet"
>
>
> S 4.
> > inspection capability is required to check whether the target URL of
> > a received packet is in the Example.com domain or not.
> >
> > The Security Controller maintains the security capabilities of each
> > NSF running in the I2NSF system, which have been reported by the
> > Developer's Management System via the Registation interface. Based
>
> Nit: "Registration"
>
>
> S 4.
> > currently using the network. Based on the retrieved information,
> the
> > Security Controller generates low-level security rules to check
> > whether the source IP address of a received packet matches any one
> > being used by a staff member. In addition, the low-level security
> > rules should be able to determine that a received packet is of HTTP
> > protocol. The low-level security rules for web filter checks that
>
> Nit: "rules"... "checks" disagree.
>
>
> S 6.
> > translated into their packet forwarding rules, whereas NSFs enforce
> > NSF-related security rules requiring the security capabilities of
> the
> > NSFs. For this purpose, the Security Controller instructs the SDN
> > Controller via NSF-Facing Interface so that SDN forwarding elements
> > can perform the required security services with flow tables under
> the
> > supervision of the SDN Controller.
>
> I'm having some trouble understanding the difference here between NSFs
> and SDN elements. They both seem to be software controlled network
> elements. Is this just some continuum about CPU power?
>
>
> S 6.
> > can perform the required security services with flow tables under
> the
> > supervision of the SDN Controller.
> >
> > As an example, let us consider two different types of security
> rules:
> >
> > Rule A is a simple packet fltering rule that checks only the IP
>
> Nit: "filtering"
>
>
> S 6.2.
> > packets that have the same call-id.
> >
> > 6. The SDN Controller installs new rules (e.g., drop packets) into
> > underlying switches.
> >
> > 7. The illegal packets are dropped by these switches.
>
> "Illegal" is probably the wrong wrod here.
>
>
> S 6.3.
> > is helpful to determine security policies for such a network.
> >
> > 6.3. Attack Mitigation: Centralized DDoS-attack Mitigation System
> >
> > A centralized DDoS-attack mitigation can manage each network
> resource
> > and manipulate rules to each switch through a common server for
> DDoS-
>
> "manipulate rules to" is not grammatical.
>
>
> S 6.3.
> >
> > Servers are categorized into stateless servers (e.g., DNS servers)
> > and stateful servers (e.g., web servers). For DDoS-attack
> > mitigation, traffic flows in switches are dynamically configured by
> > traffic flow forwarding path management according to the category of
> > servers [AVANT-GUARD]. Such a managenent should consider the load
>
> 1. This seems hard to understand without this reference, which is not
> public.
> 2. "management"
>
>
> S 6.3.
> > mitigation, traffic flows in switches are dynamically configured by
> > traffic flow forwarding path management according to the category of
> > servers [AVANT-GUARD]. Such a managenent should consider the load
> > balance among the switches for the defense against DDoS attacks.
> >
> > The procedure of DDoS-attack mitigation operations in this system is
>
> "procedure of... operations" is ungrammatical
>
>
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Department of Software
Sungkyunkwan University
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