Hi Linda:
> El 22 may 2019, a las 0:06, Linda Dunbar <[email protected]> escribió:
> 
> Rafa and Gabriel:
> 
> How about reference the module ietf-access-control-list specified in RFC8519 
> to avoid enumerating all the L4 protocols listed in IANA?
> 
Mmmm… I do not think it is required to reference that module. Actually my 
suggestion was precisely the one defined in that RFC (defining an uint8 and 
just that)

leaf protocol {
      type uint8;
      description
        "Internet Protocol number.  Refers to the protocol of the
         payload.  In IPv6, this field is known as 'next-header',
         and if extension headers are present, the protocol is
         present in the 'upper-layer' header.";
      reference
        "
RFC 791
: Internet Protocol
         
RFC 8200
: Internet Protocol, Version 6 (IPv6) Specification.";
    }


> The Module ietf-access-control-list specified in RFC8519 only list TCP and 
> UDP and have ICMP defined using Type/Code (both uint8).
> 
> Maybe import the "grouping acl-icmp-header-fields", and augment the L4 
> protocol values that are not specified by the RFC8519?  
> 
> Many protocols values listed in 
> https://www.iana..org/assignments/protocol-numbers/protocol-numbers.xhtml 
> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/protocol-numbers/protocol-numbers..xhtml> 
> are obsolete. There is no reason to enumerate them in your draft.
> 
Agree. But now we would have to select which protocol to include. 

Best Regards.
> My two cents. 
> 
> Linda
> 
> 
> 
> On Tue, May 21, 2019 at 3:02 AM Rafa Marin-Lopez <[email protected] 
> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> Hi Linda: 
> 
> In order to see whether we are in the same page here I would like to ask a 
> question.
> 
> What Yoav and Paul (and us) suggested was something as simple as this one:
> 
> typedef ike-integrity-algorithm-t 
> 
> {
>                       type uint32; 
>                       description 
>                               “The acceptable numbers are defined in IANA 
> Registry - Internet
> Key Exchange Version 2 (IKEv2) Parameters - IKEv2  Transform Type 1 - 
> Encryption Algorithm Transform IDs";
> }
> 
> Following this approach we can solve easily Paul Wouters’ comment by 
> replacing this with (for example):
> 
> Option 1)
> 
> typedef ipsec-upper-layer-proto {
>               type uint8;
>               description “ The IPsec protection can be applied to specific IP
>                                traffic and layer 4 traffic (TCP, UDP, 
> SCTP...) or
>                                ANY protocol in the IP packet payload.”;
>               reference “IANA Registry Protocol Numbers”;
> }
> 
> 
> However if we have to include a type enumeration with one enum and the value 
> in the IANA registry per enum we would have something like (in my opinion 
> more complex)
> 
> Option 2)
> 
> typedef ipsec-upper-layer-proto {
>        type union {
>            type uint8; 
>            type enumeration {
>                enum ICMP {
>                    value 1;
>                }
>                enum IGMP {
>                    value 2;
>                }
>                … 
> //And this enum per each value in 
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/protocol-numbers/protocol-numbers.xhtml 
> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/protocol-numbers/protocol-numbers..xhtml>
>            }
>        }
>    }
> 
> 
> So what option (1 or 2) are you referring to?
> 
> Best Regards.
> 
>> El 17 may 2019, a las 17:39, Linda Dunbar <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>> escribió:
>> 
>> Rafa,
>>  
>> With regard to Paul Wouters’ related comment that would imply include every 
>> number from the IANA protocol registry:  "I think you mean what I would call 
>> the "inner protocol" so that it is every number from the IANA protocol 
>> registry.” 
>>  
>> I suggest we follow the IETF practices for YANG models:
>> There are many YANG models RFCs literally listed the names of the data types 
>> defined by other RFCs. For example: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-types-09 which I 
>> just reviewed as a Gen-Art Directorate. 
>> None of those values are registered to IANA
>>  
>> Those IETF practices tell us that it is not necessary to register those 
>> values registered to IANA.
>> So I suggest you take the “reasonable approach proposed by Yoav (Paul 
>> Wouters agreed) and we are agreed”.
>>  
>> There are also many YANG Model RFCs literally list down the protocol values 
>> registered in IANA (for example, use “Identity ...” to specify the value).
>>  
>> By the way, if you do want to register to IANA, you can send the following 
>> request which can be easily done.
>>  
>> https://www.iana.org/form/protocol-assignment 
>> <https://www.iana.org/form/protocol-assignment>
>>  
>>  
>> Cheers,
>>  
>> Linda
>>  
>>   <>
>> From: Rafa Marin Lopez [mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>] 
>> Sent: Friday, May 17, 2019 4:19 AM
>> To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
>> Cc: Rafa Marin Lopez <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; Yoav Nir 
>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; [email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>; Gabriel Lopez <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>>; [email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>
>> Subject: Re: [I2nsf] WGLC and IPR poll for 
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-04
>>  
>> Dear Linda, Yoav:
>>  
>> Sorry for the delay in our answer (very busy weeks)
>>  
>> The update is taking longer as expected for several reasons: 1) we have to 
>> add and extend many descriptions we have. 2) Moreover Paul Wouters' second 
>> review (we are preparing an e-mail for him as well) is long, deserves 
>> attention and implies to applies changes.
>>  
>> Finally, 3) it is important to note that, under our point of view, there is 
>> no final resolution about what to do with the IANA Registry values related 
>> with crypto algorithms. In fact, there is a Paul Wouters’ related comment 
>> that would imply include every number from the IANA protocol registry:  "I 
>> think you mean what I would call the "inner protocol" so that it is every 
>> number from the IANA protocol registry.” 
>>  
>> Depending on the resolution of the IANA Registry part , it may imply to add 
>> each value in the IANA protocol registry. For us, this is pointless. We 
>> think the reasonable approach was proposed by Yoav (Paul Wouters agreed) and 
>> we are agreed. The only review we have received from the YANG doctor does 
>> not mention anything about this. 
>>  
>> Our hope is to have the updated version, assuming 3) takes a “reasonable” 
>> solution, at the end of this month (May)
>>  
>> Best Regards.
>>  
>>  
>> El 15 may 2019, a las 18:30, Linda Dunbar <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>> escribió:
>>  
>> Rafa,
>>  
>> Will you upload the revised draft soon? We would like to close the WGLC for 
>> this draft.
>>  
>> Thanks, Linda
>>  
>> From: Linda Dunbar 
>> Sent: Thursday, April 18, 2019 9:14 AM
>> To: 'Rafa Marin-Lopez' <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; Yoav Nir 
>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; [email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>
>> Cc: Gabriel Lopez <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
>> Subject: RE: [I2nsf] WGLC and IPR poll for 
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-04
>>  
>> Rafa, et al,
>>  
>> Yes, please have the revision to address the comments from YANG doctors.
>>  
>> Linda
>>  
>> From: Rafa Marin-Lopez [mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>] 
>> Sent: Thursday, April 18, 2019 1:56 AM
>> To: Linda Dunbar <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>> Yoav Nir <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; 
>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>
>> Cc: Rafa Marin-Lopez <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>; Gabriel Lopez 
>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>;[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>
>> Subject: Fwd: [I2nsf] WGLC and IPR poll for 
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-04
>>  
>> Dear Linda:
>>  
>> Just a short comment. In a previous e-mail, we thought we agreed that we 
>> would prepare version 05 *before* the beginning of the WGLC. At least that 
>> was your positive answer to our question.
>>  
>> In any case, I guess we can still prepare version 05 with pending comments 
>> we received from the last IETF and another aspects we have observed in the 
>> model, including YANG doctors’ comments. Correct? 
>>  
>> Best Regards
>>  
>>  
>> 
>> Inicio del mensaje reenviado:
>>  
>> De: Linda Dunbar <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>
>> Asunto: [I2nsf] WGLC and IPR poll for 
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-04
>> Fecha: 17 de abril de 2019, 16:54:13 CEST
>> Para: "[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>>
>>  
>> Hello Working Group, 
>>  
>> This email starts a four weeks Working Group Last Call on 
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-04. 
>> This poll runs until May 15, 2019. 
>>  
>> Authors: please update the draft per the comments and suggestions from YANG 
>> Doctors.
>>  
>> We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to 
>> this Document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with IETF 
>> IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details).
>> If you are listed as an Author or a Contributor of this Document please 
>> respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any 
>> relevant undisclosed IPR. The Document won't progress without answers from 
>> all the Authors and Contributors.
>>  
>> If you are not listed as an Author or a Contributor, then please explicitly 
>> respond only if you are aware of any IPR that has not yet been disclosed in 
>> conformance with IETF rules.
>>  
>>  
>> Thank you. 
>>  
>> Yoav & Linda
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