Alvaro, I submitted a new version having the data model drafts as Normative references: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-17
Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Fri, Aug 9, 2019 at 2:06 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < [email protected]> wrote: > Hi Alvaro, > I am the editor of the I2NSF Applicability draft. > Let me answer your comments inline below. > > On Thu, Aug 8, 2019 at 8:46 PM Alvaro Retana via Datatracker < > [email protected]> wrote: > >> Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for >> draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability-16: Discuss >> >> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all >> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this >> introductory paragraph, however.) >> >> >> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html >> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. >> >> >> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-applicability/ >> >> >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> DISCUSS: >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> This document does provide a little more detailed view (than rfc8329) of >> the >> I2NSF Framework in that it does reference the models that make it up. >> However, >> these references are all Informative. I am Balloting DISCUSS because if >> the >> intent is to explain how the models apply to the scenarios, then their >> references should be Normative. I think this is an easy point to address. >> > => I will let the references be Normative in the next revision of our > draft. > >> >> Regardless of the type of reference, I agree with others in the fact that >> this >> document presents use cases. While there is a deliverable in the WG >> Charter >> related to use cases, I think that was satisfied by rfc8192 (Interface to >> Network Security Functions (I2NSF): Problem Statement and Use Cases). My >> understanding of the Charter is similar to Mirja's from the "Data Models >> and >> Applicability Statements" milestone. >> >> => This I2NSF Applicability draft enhances the use cases of I2NSF with > the real implementation experience through 9 IETF Hackathons for > the last three years. > This draft describes how the I2NSF data models can be used for > cloud-based security services, > such as firewall, web filter, deep packet inspection, and DDoS > attack mitigation, along with > the SFC, SDN, and NFV at the aspect of the applicability of I2NSF > to the real world. > On the other hand, RFC 8192 just gives the audience high-level > concepts for I2NSF use cases rather than > the detailed use cases and applicability of I2NSF for real > applications. > I believe that this I2NSF applicability draft will be useful for > the developers and operators > to implement and operate the I2NSF system, so the publication of > this draft to an RFC will > be required. > > In order for this document to be an Applicability Statement, I believe that >> significant work is needed. This point is not part of my DISCUSS, so I >> will >> most likely end up ABSTAINing if the document remains in its current form. >> >> => If you give me more detailed comments on how to improve this draft, > I will work for the improvement of this draft with the co-authors of > this draft. > > Thanks. > > Best Regards, > Paul > -- > =========================== > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > Associate Professor > Department of Software > Sungkyunkwan University > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > Email: [email protected], [email protected] > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department of Software Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: [email protected], [email protected] Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
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