Hi Derek. Thank you for the review and sorry for the delay.
We are modifying the text accordingly. Best regards, Gabi. > El 3 sept 2020, a las 18:39, Derek Atkins via Datatracker <[email protected]> > escribió: > > Reviewer: Derek Atkins > Review result: Has Nits > > Hi, > > I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's > ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the > IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving > security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts. Comments > not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the > IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these > comments just like any other last call comments. > > Summary: > > * With Nits > > Details: > > * NB: I did not review the Yang Models or Appendices > > * Awkward sentence in section 8, top of page 21: > > Moreover, the startup configuration > datastore MUST be also pre-configured with the required ALLOW > policies that allow to communicate the NSF with the I2NSF Controller > once the NSF is deployed. > > Specifically "that allow to communicate the NSF with ..." should be > changed, possibly to read "that allow the NSF to communicate with ..." > > * at the end of 8.3 at the bottom of page 23 there is a space for "the > subtrees and data nodes and their sensitivity/vulnerability:" but > there is no list, it just goes onto the next paragraph at the top of > the next page. > > -derek > > > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ----------------------------------------------------------- Gabriel López Millán Departamento de Ingeniería de la Información y las Comunicaciones University of Murcia Spain Tel: +34 868888504 Fax: +34 868884151 email: [email protected]
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