Hi Menachem. Thank you for this review. We have applied your suggestions.
Best regards, Gabi. > El 3 sept 2020, a las 15:17, Menachem Dodge via Datatracker > <[email protected]> escribió: > > Reviewer: Menachem Dodge > Review result: Has Nits > > This document is well written and very readable. > > Nits > ---- > Section 5.3: The first paragraph appears to be repeated. It appears at the > end > of page 11 and also at the start of page 12. > > Section 5.4 first paragraph: > OLD --> "This information is incorporated to a list of NSFs under its control" > Suggest --> This information is incorporated in a list of NSFs under its > control" > > Section 8: Security Considerations: > > OLD --> In particular, the I2NSF Controller will handle cryptographic material > so that the attacker may try to access this information. Although we can > assume this attack will not likely > to happen due to the assumed security measurements to protect the I2NSF > Controller, it deserves some analysis in the hypothetical case the attack > occurs. > > Suggest --> In particular, the I2NSF Controller will handle cryptographic > material thus the attacker may try to access this information. Although we > can > assume this attack is not likely > to happen due to the assumed security measurements to protect the I2NSF > Controller, it still deserves some analysis in the hypothetical case that > the attack occurs. > > Section 8.1 last bullet > > OLD --> If certificates are used, the NSF MAY generate the private key and > exports the public key for certification to the I2NSF Controller. How the NSF > generates these cryptographic material (public key/ private keys) and exports > the public key it is out of scope of this document. > > Suggest --> If certificates are used, the NSF MAY generate the private key and > export the public key for certification to the I2NSF Controller. How the NSF > generates these cryptographic material (public key/ private keys) and exports > the public key, is out of scope of this document. > > > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ----------------------------------------------------------- Gabriel López Millán Departamento de Ingeniería de la Información y las Comunicaciones University of Murcia Spain Tel: +34 868888504 Fax: +34 868884151 email: [email protected]
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