Hi Tom, I will address your comments. Thanks.
Best Regards, Paul 2021년 4월 12일 (월) 오후 6:59, tom petch <[email protected]>님이 작성: > Paul > > Some admin comments on -07; I think that you need to: > > - change the title in YANG revision reference > > - add to the I-D references > RFC959 > RFC8632 > > - shorten lines. There is a limit to line length in RFC as per the Style > Guide. This is exceeded in the YANG where some of the path statements > take it over 80 while some of the examples are over 100. > > - add a reference for the import of > ietf-i2nsf-policy-rule-for-nsf > > HTH > > Tom Petcb > > On 01/04/2021 03:09, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote: > > Hi Andy, Linda, and Yoav, > > Patrick and I have addressed all the comments from Andy. > > Here is the revised draft -07: > > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-07 > > > > I attach a revision letter to explain how we addressed the comments. > > > > There are the major updates in this revision as follows: > > --- > > o This version is revised according to the comments of Andy Bierman > > who is a YANG doctor. > > > > o This version updates its title as "I2NSF NSF Monitoring Interface > > YANG Data Model". It clarifies the NSF Monitoring Interface to > > deliver NSF monitoring data to an NSF data collector (e.g., > > Security Controller and NSF data analyzer). > > > > o This version adds an attack destination IP address for DDoS-attack > > event to provide an NSF data collector with more information > about the > > destination of DDoS-attack packets. > > > > o This version supports a notification for monitoring traffic flows > > to detect the source and destination (as a victim) of security > attacks > > such as DDoS attack. > > --- > > If you have questions and comments, please let me know. > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > > > > > On Wed, Mar 24, 2021 at 3:34 AM Andy Bierman via Datatracker < > > [email protected]> wrote: >
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