Hi Linda,
Your suggested text seems good for me.
Based on this text, I have updated the Abstract of the Consumer-Facing
Interface YANG Data Model Draft as follows:
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This document describes an information model and the corresponding
YANG data model for the Consumer-Facing Interface of the Security
Controller in an Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF)
system in a Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) environment.
The information model defines various types of managed objects and
the relationship among them needed to build the flow policies from
users' perspective. This information model is based on the
"Event-Condition-Action" (ECA) policy model defined by a
capability information model for I2NSF, and the YANG data model is
defined for enabling different users of a given I2NSF system to
define, manage, and monitor flow policies within an administrative
domain.
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I will submit the revised -19 I-D today.
Thanks.
Best Regards,
Paul
On Wed, May 18, 2022 at 5:10 AM Linda Dunbar <[email protected]>
wrote:
> Dear Authors:
>
>
>
> The Abstraction of the document says:
>
> This document describes an information model and a YANG data model
>
> for the Consumer-Facing Interface between an Interface to Network
>
> Security Functions (I2NSF) User and Security Controller in an I2NSF
>
> system in a Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) environment.
>
>
>
> The consumer interface is on the North side of the Security Controller. Is
> the following description more accurate?
>
>
>
> This document describes an information model and a YANG data model for the
> Consumer-Facing Interface of the Security Controller in an I2NSF system in
> a Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) environment. The information
> model defines various types of managed objects and the relationship among
> them needed to build the flow policies from users’ perspective.
>
>
>
> Thanks, Linda
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