Hi Gyan, First of all, I thank you for your review and comments. Here is my answer to your comments. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- *OLD:*
Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model This section describes XML examples of the I2NSF Registration Interface data model under the assumption of registering several types of NSFs and querying NSF capability. A.1. Example 1: Registration for the Capabilities of a General Firewall This section shows an XML example for registering the capabilities of a general firewall in either IPv4 networks [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks [RFC3849]. *NEW:* *Appendix A. XML Examples of I2NSF Registration Interface Data Model* This section shows XML examples of the I2NSF Registration Interface data model for registering the capabilities in either IPv4 networks [RFC5737] or IPv6 networks [RFC3849]. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- I believe that two XML examples in Appendix A are useful to let the audience use this Registration Interface YANG Data Model in order to register the capabilities of an NSF as well as the performance capability and NSF access information with Security Controller. Note that both the performance capability and NSF access information do not exist in the I2NSF Capability YANG Data Model. I attach the revised draft (-18) to be submitted to the IETF repository after receiving and reflecting the comments from Secdir later. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 1:30 PM Gyan Mishra via Datatracker < [email protected]> wrote: > Reviewer: Gyan Mishra > Review result: Ready > > I reviewed the draft and the draft is well written and ready to be > progressed > for publication. > > One comment below. > > Appendix A contains XML examples of I2NSF Interface Data. > > Draft below also referenced by this draft contains as well the same > identical > examples but calls it examples of registration of capabilities and not > registration interface data. > > As this draft is about the Yang Data and Information model for I2NSF > registration interface between the security controller and DMS and not > about > registration capabilities data model defined in draft below, I think the > entire Appendix A can be removed from the draft. > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model > > > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >
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