Hi, I have reviewed the changes from version -22 to -23 and think these are improvements. I continue to support this draft.
Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA [email protected] On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 7:53 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Donald, > Thanks for your review and correction on > Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model Draft. > > I will reflect your comment on the revision. > > Thanks. > > Best Regards, > Paul > > 2022년 8월 3일 (수) 오전 8:20, Donald Eastlake <[email protected]>님이 작성: >> >> Hi, >> >> I have looked at this draft and support publication. >> >> However, I am doubtful about the following sentence: >> >> The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a >> Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system leads to a rapid >> advance in the network industry. >> >> This seems a bit too broad. Perhaps >> >> The efficient and flexible provisioning of network functions by a >> Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) system supports rapid >> deployment of newly developed functions. >> >> >> Thanks, >> Donald >> =============================== >> Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) >> 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA >> [email protected] >> >> Hello Working Group, >> >> Many thanks to the authors to address all the comments from YANG Doctor >> review. >> >> This email starts a three-weeks Working Group Last Call for >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/ >> >> This poll runs until March 10, 2022. >> >> We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to >> this Document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with IETF >> IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details). >> If you are listed as an Author or a Contributor of this Document, please >> respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any >> relevant undisclosed IPR. The Document won't progress without answers from >> all the Authors and Contributors. >> >> If you are not listed as an Author or a Contributor, then please explicitly >> respond only if you are aware of any IPR that has not yet been disclosed in >> conformance with IETF rules. >> >> Thank you. >> >> Linda >> >> _______________________________________________ >> I2nsf mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf > > -- > =========================== > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > Associate Professor > Department Head > Department of Computer Science and Engineering > Sungkyunkwan University > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > Email: [email protected], [email protected] > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php _______________________________________________ I2nsf mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
