Hi Dirk, I will address your comments on the revision of the I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface Data Model Draft.
Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Thu, Apr 13, 2023 at 6:25 PM Dirk Hugo <dirkvh...@gmail.com> wrote: > Dear all, > enclosed please find my delayed (sorry!) review of the draft version 27. I > have done the review on assignment by INT AD and think to draft is very > useful though quite detailed and maybe sometimes repetitive in structure. > What I missed is how multiple (malicious) MAC addresses or MAC address > ranges could be provided - since it is mentioned that more than one may be > in scope. > I think it should proceed. > Beyond that I only missed a reference to Figure 14 and found some nits as > provided in attached IDdiff outcome. Also a consistent format of the > "description" with or without final dot/fulstop would be nice - and > explanation of SNS before sect. 7.2 > Thanks to the authors and contributors for their effort! > Best regards > Dirk > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > I2nsf@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >
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