Hi Tom, > Looking at the 15th January version of this, I think it would benefit > from the sort of tweaking an RFC Editor might provide!
Congratulations! You get the job :-) > 'determine the best path' path(s) would be better in this day and age This is the only one I disagree with. I hate the parenthetical 's' when using the plural to mean one or more is perfectly fine English. So I s/path/paths/ All other points agreed and changes made. Thanks, Adrian > /network's fowarding/network's forwarding / > > 'protocols that compute routes and paths' I see protocols exchanging > data - computing seems a little odd, rather, for me, processes compute > > /Border gateway/Border Gateway/ > > 'through quickly modification' speedy? or rapid? > > ' a standard mechanisms ' mechanism? > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Adrian Farrel" <[email protected]> > To: <[email protected]> > Cc: <[email protected]> > Sent: Wednesday, January 09, 2013 10:06 PM > Subject: [i2rs] Draft Charter Updates > > > > http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf- _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
