Hi Susan,

this document looks very good & I clearly support it.

Just two very minor comments:


-          editorial nits - page  2:  "Sections 7" --> "Section 7"; "is I2RS 
protocol requirement" --> "is an I2RS protocol requirement"



-          I consider Ephemeral-REQ-03 as very important ("may have constraints 
that refer to operational state").  I am wondering, should the draft mention 
how to deal with the fact that it is possible for operational state to 
dynamically change.  I would think it is might be worth stating something to 
the effect that constraints should be assessed when ephemeral state is written, 
and that situations are conceivable where violations of such constraints might 
occur due to changing of operational state after the write occurred.   By the 
nature of the issue, the framework must allow for that; how to deal with such a 
situation and maintain integrity of the ephemeral configuration in such cases 
is up to the client.


One thought re: section 9, clearly we have a requirement to support 
subscriptions against ephemeral data; is there a requirement for subscriptions 
to be ephemeral themselves?  (I think it is implicitly supported via dynamic 
subscriptions.)

Thanks
--- Alex

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