As is customary, I have done my AD review
of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-09. First I would like to thank the
authors, Alex, Jan, Hari, Nitin, Robert, & Xufeng, for their work on a very
nicely written document.
I do see that there are 6 authors. I am open to hearing why and how each
author has and will continue to be an active participant - including
through AUTH48, but this is higher than the normal limit.
I am requesting that IETF Last Call start and have scheduled this for the
IESG telechat on Jan 5, 2017.
I do have a few minor comments below:
1) Section 5 mentions I-D.draft-acee-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend. Since this is
an individual draft, it's probably better not to include it as a reference.
2) On p. 25-26, in list link description: "Layering dependencies on links
in underlay topologies are
not represented, as the layering information of nodes and of
termination points is sufficient." This seems to contradict
earlier text and the exice of the list supporting link that is immediately
after. Could you please clean up or clarify?
Regards,
Alia
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