Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-08: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- = Section 2 = HTTP and ReST are defined, but they aren't used anywhere else in the document in a way that requires definition. = Section 5 = "case interface-name { leaf interface-name { type string; description "A name of the interface. The name can (but does not have to) correspond to an interface reference of a containing node's interface, i.e. the path name of a corresponding interface data node on the containing node reminiscent of data type if-ref defined in RFC 7223. It should be noted that data type if-ref of RFC 7223 cannot be used directly, as this data type is used to reference an interface in a datastore of a single node in the network, not to uniquely reference interfaces across a network."; } }" In RFC 7223 the data type appears to be called interface-ref, not if-ref. Would an example of this in this document be, say, a MAC address? = Section 6.1.1 and 6.2.1 = While notational explanations are given for "?," "*," etc., none is given for "!". = Section 9 = This section is missing a discussion of the potential sensitivity of the data this module exposes even in a read-only use case. Filling in the template at https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines and adding the text to this section should get that covered. _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
