Martin:

Thank you for the comments on the Yang doctors.  The discussion reference
was in the introductory material and not in the descriptions in the YANG
text.  Do you also want additional comments in the introductory section?

Sue Hares 

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From: Martin Bjorklund [mailto:[email protected]] 
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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Ignas Bagdonas' Discuss on
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Hi,

Just a quick comment on the YANG doctor's review.

"Susan Hares" <[email protected]> wrote:
> Earlier feedback (rtg-dir, ops-dir, yang-doctors) on YANG suggested 
> taking out the lengthy descriptions regarding logic and history.

It is very common that the YANG doctor review ask for *more* details in the
descriptions.  In general, we want the module to have as much explanatory
text as possible.  So was the case for the YD review for this document as
well; the YD wrote "The descriptions in all YANG Modules are very
short/terse."  That was for the -02 version, and even the -00 version did
not contain lengthy descriptions AFAICT.


/martin

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