Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10: No Objection

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I agree with Alissa's comments.

Requirements Language: There are at least a few instances of lower case
versions of 2119 keywords. Please consider using the boilerplate from RFC 8174.

Abstract: Missing article before "Routing Information Base"

ยง1, first paragraph: Missing article before "Routing Information Base"


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