Hi Alvaro,

Thanks for the comments, please see my replies inline...

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> From: Alvaro Retana [mailto:aretana.i...@gmail.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, April 03, 2018 3:15 PM
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> Subject: Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10:
> (with COMMENT)
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> Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> (1) "This document defines a YANG data model for Routing Information Base
> (RIB) that aligns with the I2RS RIB information model."  That and the multiple
> references to the information model (in the text and on the e-mail archive)
> make it a required document to understand for the implementation of the data
> model.  draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model should then be a Normative reference.

I am OK with it.

> 
> I am not making this point a DISCUSS because I think it is easy to solve: just
> move the reference.
> 
> (2) In Figure 1: s/route-reason-definition/route-change-reason-definition

Done.

> 
> (3) For completeness: in S2.3, the Reason attribute is missing (from S4 in 
> draft-
> ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model).
Add the following item:

"REASON - Indicates the specific reason that causes the failure, E.g.  Not 
authorized."

Hope this address your comments!

Thanks,
Mach
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