Hi Rodney, Thank you for the comments. We will provide those description/reference texts in next version.
Best Regards, Yan ________________________________________ 发件人: i2rs [[email protected]] 代表 Rodney Cummings [[email protected]] 发送时间: 2018年7月11日 3:52 收件人: [email protected] 主题: [i2rs] Comment: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-10 Hello, This module does not provide sufficient description/reference text. For example: - What is a "VLAN ID"? - What is a "TRILL Nickname"? - What is a "VxLAN Network Indentifier"? - What is "QinQ"? - What is a "Shared Risk Link Group"? - Where does "Maximum frame size" begin and end for a given media? If the author prefers to avoid a description, at least a reference should be provided so that the normative definition can be determined. Rodney Cummings > -----Original Message----- > From: i2rs <[email protected]> On Behalf Of [email protected] > Sent: Saturday, June 30, 2018 1:42 AM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected] > Subject: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network- > topology-10.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of the > IETF. > > Title : A YANG Data Model for Fabric Topology in Data > Center Networks > Authors : Yan Zhuang > Danian Shi > Rong Gu > Hariharan Ananthakrishnan > Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology- > 10.txt > Pages : 31 > Date : 2018-06-29 > > Abstract: > This document defines a YANG data model for fabric topology in Data > Center Networks and it represents only one possible view of the dc > fabric. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Di2rs-2Dyang-2Ddc-2Dfabric- > 2Dnetwork- > 2Dtopology_&d=DwICAg&c=I_0YwoKy7z5LMTVdyO6YCiE2uzI1jjZZuIPelcSjixA&r=WA71s > f2o7Dw7CbYhFt24DPjt3lJuupswWYdnboKbZ8k&m=WwQYXrZxVqdjLasoOipHncAKuqGUfD2kq > wLcFvl1LCQ&s=5KeG_ktaOS0i19WXvTOI7-RaxvPaqEBPLfbbgVmG2kU&e= > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__tools.ietf.org_html_draft-2Dietf-2Di2rs-2Dyang-2Ddc-2Dfabric- > 2Dnetwork-2Dtopology- > 2D10&d=DwICAg&c=I_0YwoKy7z5LMTVdyO6YCiE2uzI1jjZZuIPelcSjixA&r=WA71sf2o7Dw7 > CbYhFt24DPjt3lJuupswWYdnboKbZ8k&m=WwQYXrZxVqdjLasoOipHncAKuqGUfD2kqwLcFvl1 > LCQ&s=CpJ_HIpLfLkm5-HURpFJKC1bqM1AWPtszuKAwdNIidU&e= > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_html_draft-2Dietf-2Di2rs-2Dyang-2Ddc- > 2Dfabric-2Dnetwork-2Dtopology- > 2D10&d=DwICAg&c=I_0YwoKy7z5LMTVdyO6YCiE2uzI1jjZZuIPelcSjixA&r=WA71sf2o7Dw7 > CbYhFt24DPjt3lJuupswWYdnboKbZ8k&m=WwQYXrZxVqdjLasoOipHncAKuqGUfD2kqwLcFvl1 > LCQ&s=dyGSo6awEuTk8aQbdivXhqPLUxI0QsgNlIcY6B-As10&e= > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_rfcdiff- > 3Furl2-3Ddraft-2Dietf-2Di2rs-2Dyang-2Ddc-2Dfabric-2Dnetwork-2Dtopology- > 2D10&d=DwICAg&c=I_0YwoKy7z5LMTVdyO6YCiE2uzI1jjZZuIPelcSjixA&r=WA71sf2o7Dw7 > CbYhFt24DPjt3lJuupswWYdnboKbZ8k&m=WwQYXrZxVqdjLasoOipHncAKuqGUfD2kqwLcFvl1 > LCQ&s=GHNC2CIMrdSIJw2tGGNYLfLyYuGAi1ksMDTdACFFjYQ&e= > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=ftp-3A__ftp.ietf.org_internet- > 2Ddrafts_&d=DwICAg&c=I_0YwoKy7z5LMTVdyO6YCiE2uzI1jjZZuIPelcSjixA&r=WA71sf2 > o7Dw7CbYhFt24DPjt3lJuupswWYdnboKbZ8k&m=WwQYXrZxVqdjLasoOipHncAKuqGUfD2kqwL > cFvl1LCQ&s=M8kA1HnOmBSXJrPQ6MqjSRoNjCQEeIQtFA60b5NAGOw&e= > > _______________________________________________ > i2rs mailing list > [email protected] > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https- > 3A__www.ietf.org_mailman_listinfo_i2rs&d=DwICAg&c=I_0YwoKy7z5LMTVdyO6YCiE2 > uzI1jjZZuIPelcSjixA&r=WA71sf2o7Dw7CbYhFt24DPjt3lJuupswWYdnboKbZ8k&m=WwQYXr > ZxVqdjLasoOipHncAKuqGUfD2kqwLcFvl1LCQ&s=uyOF3fKCGnKH585erExEsj0Kn8DNGL50wS > RfPDxfxrw&e= _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
