Hi, Tom:
Thank for your valuable review. See comments inline below.
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发件人: i2rs [mailto:[email protected]] 代表 tom petch
发送时间: 2019年8月16日 20:00
收件人: Susan Hares <[email protected]>; [email protected]
抄送: [email protected]
主题: Re: [i2rs] WG LC: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-07.txt
Not ready
The text says
/*Consider udpating this part to make use of draft-ietf-softwire-iftunnel*/
Well yes, consider it and come to a conclusion otherwise I cannot see how this
is ready to advance.
[Qin]: Good catch, will fix this. The idea is to align with RFC7224 and reuse
iana-interface-type.
The YANG module contains many references - good - but they are not in the I-D
references; again, not ready to advance. I see
4761
4762
6325
6326
7348
802.1ad
802.1ah
802.1Q
[Qin]:Fixed.
IANA considerations references RFC7950 - RFC 6020 is better here as all that
RFC7950 says is go see RFC6020.
[Qin]:Agree, will update based on your suggestion.
OLD
This version of this YANG module is part of
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topo-07;
NEW
This version of this YANG module is part of
"RFC XXXX: A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies"
[Qin]:Fixed.
You also have this unsuitable reference twice in the state module
[Qin]:Fixed.
The state module lacks references for the imports
[Qin]:Fixed.
The state module description clause seems misleading; it is only the state part
of a module when NMDA is not supported.
[Qin]:Fixed.
Appendix A - is it Normative? The customary convention is the Appendices are
not unless stated otherwise and there is no statement here.
[Qin]:No, will make this clear.
'An Example' does not use the addresses set aside for documentation
[Qin]:Good catch, will use RFC7042 recommended address range.
What is the closing date for this Last call?
Tom Petch
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From: "Susan Hares" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Cc: <[email protected]>
Sent: Friday, August 09, 2019 4:42 PM
> Greetings:
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> This draft on L2 network topology has been reviewed by the I2RS WG 3
times.
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> However, in discussion with the ADs it is deemed appropriate to do one
more
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> WG LC and include any input from rtgwg or grow.
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> Please indicate whether you support publication of this document.
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> In your comments, please indicate "support" or no "support".
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> If you feel there issues that need to be resolved,
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> Please indicate whether these issues are editorial,
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> Yang syntax, or technical content.
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> It would be helpful to indicate whether you know of
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> Network deployments or potential network deployments of this draft.
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> Cheerily,
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> Sue Hares
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