Done, thanks for catching this. The diff is: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-11
-Qin -----邮件原件----- 发件人: tom petch [mailto:[email protected]] 发送时间: 2019年8月30日 19:18 收件人: Qin Wu <[email protected]>; [email protected] 主题: Re: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10.txt Qin Looks good, mostly, but you still have import ieee802-dot1q-types {... reference "IEEE Std 802.1Q-2017: Virtual Bridged Local Area Networks."; as opposed to 802.1Qcp-2018 (as you probably know, the reference clause needs the date to make the reference unique). Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Qin Wu" <[email protected]> Sent: Thursday, August 29, 2019 8:02 AM > -v 10 is uploaded > The diff is: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topolo gy-10 > I can spin on this draft another round if additional comments come before the deadline of LC. > > -Qin > -----邮件原件----- > 发件人: i2rs [mailto:[email protected]] 代表 [email protected] > 发送时间: 2019年8月29日 14:59 > 收件人: [email protected] > 抄送: [email protected] > 主题: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of the IETF. > > Title : A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies > Authors : Jie Dong > Xiugang Wei > Qin Wu > Mohamed Boucadair > Anders Liu > Filename : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10.txt > Pages : 32 > Date : 2019-08-28 > > Abstract: > This document defines a YANG data model for Layer 2 network > topologies. > > Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor) > > Please update these statements within the document with the RFC > number to be assigned to this document: > > o "This version of this YANG module is part of RFC XXXX;" > > o "RFC XXXX: A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies"; > > o reference: RFC XXXX > > Please update the "revision" date of the YANG module. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topolog y/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-to pology-10 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topolo gy-10 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > i2rs mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs > _______________________________________________ > i2rs mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs > _______________________________________________ i2rs mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2rs
